Revise the following sentences to present the information positively. Use positive or neutral language. We cannot offer free shipping
Part 1. Sentence Editing
Revise the following sentences to present the information positively. Use positive or neutral language.
(2 points each)
- We cannot offer free shipping for orders under $100.
- Unfortunately we cannot afford to continue the program, so we will conclude it on May 1.
Revise the following sentence to present the bad news with passive-voice verbs. (2 points each)
- We are postponing indefinitely requests for company tours.
- This hospital has a strict policy of not admitting patients until we have verified their insurance
coverage.
The following question and answer appeared on a shoe company website. Revise the answer that the
company provided. Do not revise the customer’s question. Position the bad news in a subordinate
clause. Write clearly and concisely. (2 points)
Question: Do you plan on offering this shoe in a C? If not, how does it compare? I normally order
a 7.5 W from you. Carla R.
Answer: Currently, this style is made in B width only. However, a very similar block-heel style,
the Laree Grand Pump, is available in C width in several colors of suede. To view other styles in C
width, you can use the filter drop-down tabs on the shoe page to shop by size, width, color and
more.
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