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Hi, please give me a feedback for the two of thesis statement. look at the file that i uploaded and read it carefully.

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For the thesis statement on mechanical engineering, it is important to note that the student has made a statement that is of adequate length and on that is specific. This is the fact that one can identify what you are talking about and it is clear on the issue………………………….

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